in #poetry2 years ago

The sand of the sea ....

shakes her beautiful hair,

refreshing my secret course,

that walks in distant sands,

red cheeks brushed by the sun.

My ghostly figure,

they exclaim his sweet name,

what a honey bomb

it provokes my delirium,

and my bird in solitude,

nest within the noble silence,

that overwhelmed contemplates,

his naughty girl smile.

trying to lift my chalice

with red nails of passion,

caressing my dream,

already wet in it.

I hope you like it, vote and leave your comment.

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A poem might be complicated, might hide things on purpose but this one looks like you are just confused. "it provokes my delirium" is an excellent line and there is nothing else. You obviously have something beautiful to write about, but you don't.

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