SteemitPoetryContest #1 - Prisoners Of Our Own Devices
Prisoners Of Our Own Devices
we restrain - lock away
behind a too familiar door
see our chains - come what may
our minds have so much to adore.
all so clean - what we're shown
trained to never think to question
smaller screen - it's our throne
stained with choices of oppression.
Who decides when it's time to flee?
We're prisoners if we choose to abide.
The mechanism slides, so easily.
Excuse me, while I step outside.
This is my entry in @terrycraft's Steemit Poetry Contest #1. The task: Write a poem of three quatrains on the subject "Freedom". For this I tried to write a song, with two stanzas and a refrain. I used multiple rhyming schemes in the stanzas, replaced with a novel scheme in the refrain. I hope you enjoy my attempt.
Thanks to the wonderful @sunravelme at the Poetry Workshop at The Writers' Block. If you write anything (and you do), you should check this place out! There's something there for every style of writing.
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Love to see the final product! Great work!
Thanks! I enjoyed our discussion about it last night!
Deep and true words
We are willingly locked into the technology that was designed to aid us
But it ails us into addiction instead, great poem
By the way, There is a new Steemit Haiku Poem Contest: Make Haikus Great Again out
You should definitely enter in too
All Haiku fans are going to enter including me
Thanks! I'll be there.
You're welcome, that's good to hear. :) I just created my entry and posted it on my page, I shall share it soon onto the contest