Lovely

in #poetry7 years ago (edited)





Lovely
As an autumn breeze
In turning trees,


Your figure outlined
By the sun,


Hair backlit
And each strand
Dancing


Such days
Seldom come


Or end
Romancing,


But ours was one…


And you, my Love,
Are still my sullen sun



© 2017, John J Geddes. All rights reserved


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Fantastic. i upvoted your post.@johnjgeddes

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Poem is beautiful like a pic.

Romantic write. Love this. :)

Just perfect to enter in the autnum atmosphere :)

Thank You!

thank you - love autumn

Yes, is one of the best season of the year, that feeling of warm wine or chocolate :D

Your work is such an inspiration! Keep it up xx

I hadn't read anything romantic in steemit before. This was pretty good!I can really picture it. Some moments just need to be preserved artistically.

Upvoted and followed!

thanks, @steemedchitty - Romance? Famous for it :)

This post has received a 12.28 % upvote from @booster thanks to: @johnjgeddes.

Guess I know who you are writing about!

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