I Miss You

in #poetry7 years ago (edited)





I miss you


In the bitter scent of fall,

When the scraping

Down the hall

Of maple stars

Makes me wonder

If the years

Were worth it all.



Has life

Disappointed you

Or made you

Lose your fire?

Do you see October

As a winter prelude,

The mere remnants

Of desire?

Or perhaps you think

We're merely

Wine-stained dregs

Of lovers

We once were.



© 2017, John J Geddes. All rights reserved


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"... a winter prelude"
Very nice, liked it a lot.

You should be titled, 'The Mood Poet'.
Well done.
I know the photo is not important, but just had to add that it is beautiful

thanks, arthur - appreciate that

Maple stars could feel the maples leaves on this one sweet and melancholic great poem and picture choice.

i liked it. resteemed.

thanks, athena

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fantastic poem.

Seems that their love life moves in a cyclic motion and nothing really changed??

Always, you've got me reading over and over again.

Love this expressions;

"bitter scent", "Has life disappointed you or made you loose your fire?..... Hot!

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