I Know Your Thoughts
My heart goes still;
I feel your whisper
Like a breeze down a hall.
I know when you think of me
I sense a change;
Like a scent in the air
Before a spring rain.
I know when my heart
Goes dark and quiet,
I feel you near
Though my mind denies it.
I never tire
Of gazing at you,
The way I stare at rain,
Or watch the moon.
I know you doubt it
As you’re inclined to do,
But I know your thoughts
For mine are always on you.
John This poem is very deep, it delves into the recondite of our being. Congratulations
thanks @felix - You get it :)
This one gave me chills on the first paragraph that intensified in the second!!! Really enjoyed this :)
Now I'm gonna go read it again hehhee
thanks, @dreemsteem :)
curtsies and runs from the room before more of @johnjgeddes work sucks her back in.... LOL
And what beautiful thoughts are those, for sure.
thanks, @flashfiction
Awww.. this melts my heart John! This is full of love. 😍❤
thanks, Leah
that was quite an amazing poem , indeed he is a great God
Interpretation on different levels - I meant it as a romantic poem but your interpretation works except for the last stanza - God knows our thoughts, when we stand or sit down, and there's no doubt or shadow of wavering in him :)
nice
thanks
Beautiful poem!
wondetful poem, i like it..keep it up...dear sir @johnjgeddes
thanks
This is so romantic, perfect for the month of love. Sometimes when we love someone so much, we think, speak, live, breathe that person.😍
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