Enigma...My Love is a Fever
mysterious
As rainfall at night
Secretive
As a dark moon
Recondite
A raven
At twilight
Petals of darkness
Fall
one
by
one
And evening
Tarnishes
Your features
Eyes,
Mouth and hair
Obscured
Adumbrated
With gloom
Words
Opaque
And risque
Brushed
With luster
Of the moon
Lakes and bays
Of solitude
Surround
And remind me
You are darker
Than my moods
I've begun to learn
My heart
Was right—
You're black as hell,
And dark as night.
Poem.? More like a journey to another place.
ha ha, I'll assume that's good - it's a long way from roses are red:)
O I love dark imagery. It makes me feel like I have entered into another dimension or the likes of it.
This is awesome. You are very good @johnjgeddes !
I love your poetry style! Fierce! Resteemed!
thanks, Leah. You are an encourager :)
Yes, I am. Keep it up! :)
motivation mind relaxing poem
This poet is in love!
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Amazing Poem! Reminds me of you @moonsoleil
caice
You have a incredible talent. Great poem. Have a good night
Beautiful poetry We can share our thoughts through poetry.
If he is black as hell,
And dark as night.....
Why do you lose some energy for him ....
naice