Cozy Nook
I see trees like men walking
Mar 8:24
Has clouded my pain
Shut me away
Like a train
In a station.
I look out the window
At passersby
Bleary eyed
And surprised
As the rain trails
Turn them to colored trees,
Their motion
Resembling
Trembling leaves.
And I, inside
In my own autumn
Curl up
In my cozy compartment
Sip tea
And fall asleep...
Sheltered
From rain and wind,
And people who walk
Like coloured tree limbs.
You capture and convey the mood, the specific emotional sensations of such refuge on a perfectly timed rainy day. I'm still seeing their blurry muted colors in my mind's eye.
you went directly into the heart of the poem - well-expressed. Thank you.
Me encanta la forma como se deslizan tus versos en la página, con su musicalidad e imágenes. A nice poem, soft and deep. Be success
thank you especially for the comments in Spanish - you appreciate the form and that's very important
The rain has clouded my pain
Fantastic use of metaphor to relate you and your pain.
I can see a lot of imageries expressed here.
Very good poem
thank you, @josediccus
Anytime sir,you got great poems i use to enjoy reading
Nice post:)
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Lovely @johnjgeddes. I see compartments within compartments. Matryoshka dolls. Dolls looking out at the world as they recede within. All flavoured with the autumn spice of colour. Beautiful work John.
I hope are enjoying and drawing inspiration from the fall in the centre of our beautiful country. Nfld. is lovely this time of year.
I recently did a musical piece inspired by "The Land of the Little While." I shot it on the windswept Nfld. coast. See the comments.
Cheers
that is very poetic, Bucky, and perceptive. I appreciate your curation and your artistry