The WATER is thin: fold it down in my Pocket and Lock it in
The water is Thin
fold it down in
my Pocket & Lock it in
a plastic Packet
Walking by the Sea
take home the beach
that the eye can Reach
listen to it roar
Hold it in a Globe
My hand turns it over
It amazes me more
the mind is Fed
tight in Bed
a mystery Ahead
I like how you traversed from the descriptive into the surreal. Nice write.
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