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RE: Poem: Ending
Ha, nothing. Trying to write from the point of view of "what if." Like how would i react if my man was lashing out in anger. Would I have the strength to dump him immediately regardless of context with his fist through a wall, or in a brawl at the bar?
Does drunk fighting indicate he'd hit me some day? More a philosophical poem, but as a self proclaimed "imagiste" got to use the images.
Oh good. Your writing is too vivid. Easy to think it's real.
Glad it's a story.
huge compliment! Love it! Thank you :)