SteemitPoetryContest #4. – What you did to me. – A poem for the broken hearted.
What you did to me.
There is a void deep in my heart
that can't be filled with dreamy stars.
A hole tearing my soul apart,
eager for love back from the start.
This hollow heart came back to life
when you appeared under my sight.
But your love was another lie,
brought me again to endless night.
You ripped my chest from childish hopes,
emptied my eyes from fiery looks,
tied my broken heart with weak ropes
and stole my love just like a crook.
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Very sad but moving poem. I love the image. Good luck!
Thank you! :)
You're welcome <3
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There is a void deep in my heart
that can't be filled with dreamy stars.
Hola. Saludos amigo. Estos versos llegan hondo....
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