I enjoyed reading your poetry. The obvious agony and inner turmoil that the character was experiencing after a breakup was palpable. I also liked the images of wine inserted throughout the verses which could indicate the person may have been finding solace in alcohol without the company of his lost love. Deep.
What a read... you saw right through me
Poetry is always open to interpretation, but your words and images communicated some very strong emotions. Keep writing, you are good at this. 😊