Unconditionally conditional
You have to prove yourself worthy to make it through everything.
I want to recommend something to you, if I may...
if you believe hard enough, you succeed in anything.
Do you think you or her should stop loving?
"I will scrape up all my money and cover,
whatever expenses forbid me from coming."
That is what you should say.
she said to me when we first talked.
It all happened after my mind had worsened,
because of emotions, which into my mind had stalked.
rocks and twigs were thrown into my road,
and that for you to be unconditionally mine,
I only had to choose another way on the crossroads.
Amazing
Thank you for your kind words!
Aww a beautiful poem, did you write it yourself?
Yes, yes I did! And thank you!
Awesome! at time you have to follow your heart beat, but we should not allow our impression to control our action..
You are correct! But you know, when you've already felt "love" and you feel something better than that... maybe you should go for it. Thank you though!
So lovely
Great poem. I like your understanding of unconditional love :) Fits mine too. Welcome to the POETS UNITED group your poem has been included into daily dose poetry and prose issue. God Bless You. Peace and Love.