Where is the spoken word version!? You Curie fans demand it!! Seriously though, after hearing you recite your poems, I feel like it's the missing piece that puts your poetry over the top, mate. I've long been a fan of your lyrical stylings. You write poetry like you write stories, yet it reads like a song. Every line feels like it's a melody that's pleasing to the ears, while delivering a gripping tale. You have that power, so never doubt that, mate.
One day again, I promise. Can't let the fans down! And thanks for the great feedback. I tend to have a melody in my head as I write the words. That's just how I learned to write poetry, but also trying to study how others do it. Especially those who do it well to @beginningtoend. I think this is one of my more deliberate attempts at telling a story in poetry. I was actually surprised by the outcome, which is why I never got around to recording it. Just wrote and published, really. But I'll see how I go with the next one.