"Everything was Perfect" : A Poetry of Lady being Broken.

in #poetry7 years ago

"Everything was Perfect"


A simple girl
Who enjoys everything.
Moments that can't stop her from laughing
And overwhelmingly enjoying.

One time she found herself crying
She couldn't do anything.
When everything is falling
She's in pain but no one knows.


She's hurting but still mouth's close
It was the relationship she dreamt and expected.
Well, it was way back then
Everything was perfect.


Now, please bring her
Wherever you'll be
That not just in her dream
Your love like a love stream.


Overflowing with feeling
Feeling of loving.
That's what she's wanting
In fact, what she's badly needing.


She was joyful and correct
But one thing was direct.
Your love was what she lacked
And I thought Everything was Perfect.


Thank you for Reading!

I appreciate you dropped by and took a read on this poetry of mine. If you have comments, insights or suggestions, please don't hesitate to drop it by. It will surely be a big help to me, and to the readers engagement. Thank you so much. Much appreciated! :)

All the best,


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Things always wont be the we wanted it to be. Always prepare an option.

Your post of poetry is excellent, no doubt it. The following part of your work is super. Overflowing with feeling
Feeling of loving.
That's what she's wanting
In fact, what she's badly needing.

She was joyful and correct
But one thing was direct.
Your love was what she lacked
And I thought Everything was Perfect.

ThanKs FoR YoUr GooD InFo.

When love provide positive influence in life. That's the perfection.
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The words were direct.
Tagos po. Hehehe, galing! :)

Wow! That’s really sad and beautiful. Who’s this about? What inspired you?

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