SteemitPoetryContest #2 - Nature's Symphony

in #poetry7 years ago

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Moving deep into the Adirondack fold
the noise of now fading behind
the sounds of nature consume me
as I hike toward contentment old.


I reach the shores of a mountain lake
and find a space to sit on the beach
the wonder of this amphitheater awes me
my eyes eat of every splendorous flake.


I close my eyes and the performance begins
the quiet of the symphony booming all around
my mind dances freely to the silent song
whispering breezes hushed as the silence deepens.



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Nice images. I like rhyming the 1st and 4th lines as you have done here. Gives it a unique rhythm. One thing - I can't seem to find the contest itself - is this upvote helping you? Are there judges? If I need to vote elsewhere, I will. Good luck.

Here is the link to the contest.
https://steemit.com/poetrycontest/@terrycraft/steemit-poetry-contest-2-winners-of-1
The upvotes and comments are always appreciated. Thank You. Looking forward to seeing your entry in the competition.

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