Barbs of Longing - A Poem of Love

in #poetry7 years ago (edited)

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My heart rapt in barbs of longing
of love past yet never released
warmth etched onto my soul
a smile etched into my mind


the better part of me
now lives in memories
and my love is doled out
but in fractions to the future
the fullest portion of emotion
still wrapped in the barbs of longing.

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This poem written by me rough and tweaked in
the Writer's Block on Discord with the help of
@jonknight. I would suggest checking it out. It is
an amazing resource for writers by writers.



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I think it's really good. Nice job done, enjoyed reading it ;)

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