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RE: (400!) Poem / Walking with life.,,
You use vivid imagery to create the illusion of the "woman." I did enjoy the guidance provided by a seemingly separate character when in actuality it became the speaker's inner voice. I have found myself contemplating at times why our inner voice does in fact sound like someone else's voice entirely. Is it a defense mechanism? I am also curious, what made you choose to have a woman be the voice?
It's the embodiment of life to me, life creates everything as woman create life within every person, I also listen to suggestions more easily if it's by a woman
Good choice :) I appreciate it