SteemitPoetryContest #1: Oh, Freedom

in #poetry • 7 years ago (edited)

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Looks like a quintessential life,
Heart is hard-pressed inwardly.
The guise of smile, blithe seems rife,
Look beyond, the face of melancholy.

Kept hearing those undesirable voice,
Hankering to procure a happy pill.
Into the extremes, remain in poise.
The sight of joy, masking is real.

All I need is emancipation from depression,
See the light away from captivity.
Oh freedom, I have self-determination,
Liberation brings me to tranquility.

This poem was written to join the contest initiated by @terrycraft. It is about that longing of freedom from the depression, which is afflicting many. May everyone find tranquility and real happiness.

Photo is mine

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     7 years ago 

    Thank you for the excellent post..

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       7 years ago 

      I like the picture. Where did you take it?

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         7 years ago 

        lovely poem nice pictures that go with it.

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           7 years ago 

          galing nyo talaga gumawa ng poem sir.. :-)

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             7 years ago 

            Salamat po. Gawa din po kayo.

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               7 years ago 

              hehe, hindi po ako marunong ehh.. kontento na po ako sa basa na lang

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                 7 years ago 

                Freedom! It has always price to pay! Thanks iyanpol12!

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                   7 years ago 

                  As a follower of @followforupvotes this post has been randomly selected and upvoted! Enjoy your upvote and have a great day!

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                     7 years ago 

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                       7 years ago 

                      idol talaga kita sir @iyanpol12

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