The Beauty of Love: Boundless, Beyond and Beautiful
Let me feel your warm delicate face,
prying the jagged sign of grace,
love of an ageless sense,
marks the unhindered conscience.
You cradle your pose remarkably,
the unheard voice feels poignantly,
dignity assuredly recompense to fruition,
a caring grief mildly sense of coercion.
A boundless affection embraces universally,
of sweet adoration obliged accountability,
of sparkling impression I am revealed,
with you that ardour I am assured!
And beyond the tenderness last evermore,
as high as Utopia ever with your fervor,
for zeal of affection the beauty of love resides,
as my beloved as beautiful as farsides!
Sampaloc, Manila
September 3, 2017
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gusto ko abuting ang kalaliman ng mga salita na nababasa ko...nice nice..very creative. Let me try to write poems as well..
ay sir kayang-kaya mo ito sir... sa magaang na tula lang muna. then later... medyo pabigat ng pabigat... Basahin ko tula mo sir kapag nakagawa ka na!
Paki translate po sa Filipino. :P :D
naman... talaga naman... kumakamot talaga ako ng ulo kay zarrrr! matagal me magtransalate talaga hahahaha wee!
Wala me ma comment eh. :P
Ah...ano daw? Dinugo na naman po ilong ko. Hehe, galing as always! :)
kabayan may dugo dugong nangyayari sa post ni sir @iwrite pahiram salbabida nalunod aq sa lalim ng salita :)
Hahaha, eto oh @antonette! Hold tight sistah, babaha pa yan! ;)
lol antonette! sige pagagaanin ko na ang tula... para di nosebleed.
susubukan ko na ngang tumula ng magaang mam shellany... di ko na alam gagawin ko ehehehe...
Hahaha uy wag style mo kasi yan... nasanay lang kasi kami ng simple English. Lol! :)
Awesome. Love you maintain your niche masterfully and consistently. This is what will eventually make you a force to reckon with. A good example of this is @jedau. He is pinoy. With time, you will expand your horizon and impact the world. Remember that the world exists on steemit, so start meeting people like @verbal-d @dreemit @therealpaul @meesterboom etc and move!
I am in awe and grateful to your simple mini-review of my piece. I just hope can I can consistently create more of this work. Thank you very much from the bottom of my heart!
Yes, you can. I never made poems, i always made toems where t is for terry. and i cant find them anymore but i can bring them out all over again. It does take some exertion, mind flexing and some playfulness. too depth and real understanding of life, hustle, story, pains can also be joy too. When i use to do toems, i can write on anything. Please visit my last post for tips, You will see that i dug out really old posts of mine and look for technical twists in them. So you can write a killer poem, just by looking at the google search box and pondering wondering at how much like a window into a universe it looks cos indeed it is "google". Link up with the world as whole, i just remember @sumsum too. Look for @aksinya art contest, look at the arts there and create poems around them.
Okay sir terry. I'll write some more and meet with other fellow poet Thanks much!
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As always sir John. Galing!
wahahaha naman mam... Salamat ng marami... Gawa ka rin ng tula mam...
Grabe sir! Thank you for the great poem.
Thanks nerdonsi!
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wow with feelings good ything it is in english kaya na vote hahah