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RE: Poem / The Elephant

in #poetry7 years ago

I like the word "slowly turning to or into sand"

These creatures are the biggest on land
But are slowly turning to sand

The symbol or figure of speech that was used is plain and yet is powerful enough to make sense that when they are gone just like the rest of us we turn in to sand!

Nice line!

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