SALVATION SONG (VERSE2)
Her heart was still a virgin, but her body was taken
So good at being bad, bad became good to her
She did the worst things best, every man wanted her
She painted her own pictures of reality with 50 shades of grey
But no stroke of the White God
To fill the void inside her heart, she filled the space between her legs
Suicidal thoughts were hanging the ropes
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It's-kg the rapper. Good one dear
Thanks...
I felt sad while reading this but in a way it also felt recognizable. And so it made me feel twice as sad... Thank you. In my opinion that's the aim of poetry, to manipulate the feelings of the reader. Well done!
Awwwww... Thank you....
... Ok then I think you should watch out for the third verse....
They don't make seat belts for the heart, but thanks for the heads up :D
Wow.... I like this.... "They don't make seat belts for the heart" ...
Jesus this is beautiful line.
Permit me to copy this @itz-kg. Don't count it as fligarism and don't laugh at it hehe.
Hahahhahahahahahah 😂😂😂😂 as long as you tag me dear...
Hey man you have been featured in Friday Night Poetry Show .. of Steemit Poets United Community hosted by your lovely Poetry Angel @angelvselinov. Episode 2 :)
Wow....Thanks