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RE: Why I Strive (Original Poem)

in #poetry7 years ago

really incredible writing - there are a couple gems in this poem. they really stood out to me.
one being "give into the comfortable lie" and the other being "I am because of the chance that i might be".

really powerful statements even on their own. amazing words - keep writing!

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-Atbrittain

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