Poem- A Journey
Lost in our own worlds we create our castles of glass,
Fragile and breakable,
We mould our dreams in vessels of brass,
Yet we forget life is perishable,
We keep walking in the dark aware of the dangers of the wild,
We stumble and fall over time and again,
We search for a single ray of light and a thread of hope like a child,
Holding onto our dear life,
We bear the pain and the marks,
We emerge as brand new,
For the deeper we fall, the higher we rise...
-©Pratibha Badgal AA
All the posts under the name Pratibha Badgal AA are my own.
Lovely piece . Your ability to always find word that not only make its more enjoyable but also expresses your thoughts make you a great writer...keep it going @illusions16
Thank u @kamiikazer. A few words of appreciation keeps one going 😊
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your poetry is always beautiful to read friends, you have a thousand beautiful word-kaga strung into beautiful sentence, I am very inspired by your work.
See and read my poetry 😁
Thank you @azyref. I did read your poetry and commented on it. I appreciate your kind words❤
thanks Sir
I truly enjoy short poems like this. It's hard to imagine that poems with very few words can contain so much meaning, and can be interpreted in so many ways. Truly a lovely piece.
Thank u @vegaron. Your words mean a lot:)
Loving your writing hon. Nice to see you at #Payitforward contest & Asapers :)
Rock on!
Thank u @elsiekjay🤘
Hope remains
It does @nationall. The only thing that keeps us going. Thank you for the read:)