100 DAYS POETRY CHALLENGE [DAY #3]~ APATH

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Why the rain
Why the pain
Why the shine
Why the smile

Understanding is the language you can't speak
A mind of the heart , I wish for thee
Silence is just an absence of vibes
Tears don't need shoulders, they need to be wiped

You look without seeing
And hear without listening
You see alphabets
And you know you read tests.

Sad is weakness
Strength is an opponent
Giving is sanity
Taking is beauty

For pleasure sake let us gain
For winning sake let us change
Charm is a bait
Home is the fate

Fond of you ,makes monsters
Worry as a joke are breakers
Sweets can pray
But you can only play

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hi thanks for reading! 😊 i hope you all could relate. Im still sleepy and i had to write that. Pardon 😀. I just cant miss a day .not yet .

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**APATH is the poem. The first stanza; there'sbeauty in rain and benefits in shine. But one needs a heart to know these. Without emotions, what is pain? And smile will make no more meanings other than an act.

Why the rain
Why the pain
Why the shine
Why the smile

The second stanza;

Understanding is the language you can't speak
A mind of the heart , I wish for thee
Silence is just an absence of vibes
Tears don't need shoulders, they need to be wiped

There are many meanings into silence.
But the apath just says its an absence of sounds (vibes)
And do they see the reasons why one should be comforted?

Third stanza;

You look without seeing
And hear without listening
You see alphabets
And you know you read tests

They really don't see and don't listen. And seeing and listening is much deeper.
Emotions are needed to be able to care and pay attention to people

The fourth stanza;

Sad is weakness
Strength is an opponent
Giving is sanity
Taking is beauty

Being worried or sad is seen as weakness
And strength is only seen as threats and hence must be challenged.
And when one decides to give selflessly, they only focus on taking endlessly without being concern about the givers energy.

The fifth stanza;

for pleasure sake let us gain
For winning sake let us change
Charm is a bait
Home is the fate

Pleasure is their only drive
Deceptions and charm is just one of the ways to feel power. And should you fall for it, let's leave it for fate to decide .

sixth stanza;

Fond of you ,makes monsters
Worry as a joke are breakers
Sweets can pray
But you can only play

Well, he or she who grows fond of them may just forget how to feel again. The sweetest people may still stick around them. But that wouldnt change the fact that, they lack emotions.

hi lovely ones, i did my best to explain. Without trying to go mysterious again..i hope i did good with it..

what really inspired this poem?

I wondered how it will turn out should a person with no emotions write a poem. I tried writing with no emotions but failed. And rather wrote about he who had no emotions .... @hartfloe this what i could do. Lol.

Shout out to all fellow poets.. love you all. Good night

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Nice photography writing

Thank you soo much. I appreciate. 😊

for winning sake let us change

I like this line a lot. I think I'm going to make it one of my new saying, I can do that right?

Of course you can 😊😆 ....
Ill take the former..

for winning sake, let us gain

I like your poem! Keep it up and see you at the finish line in 97 days!

Haah!! 97 days ... here we go..thanks very much. I'll see you there too

So heres IceQueenLove with another captivating poem again.
I fancy your use of oxymoronic expressions.
Stay great.

Heyaa... i added the explanation to the poem... 😊..thanks for loving this.. i pray i dont give up ..lol. and i should go check your 3rd entry. .

And you saw nothing! Lol
Haven't written it yet but will definitely do before the deadline.
No you wont give up!
But pray for me not to, because as it stands...

Beautiful poem

Thank you very much sir 😊

Great work. Everyday I am awed by your poems. Writing without emotion you said, that in itself is an emotion expressed in writing in my eyes anyway. Looking forward to reading more of your works.

Thanks buddy.. same here..😀

I really liked your poem and how you show the a paths true nature as a taker. Great job.

Thank you very much. .. glad you could relate ...means you aren't apath😛(just messing with you) all the best sir and have a nice day.😊

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