Void Entity (poem)
Absolute void positively charged
Osmosis starlight; tetragonal litharge
Opposed to zero, lest lack a digital sum
Sophimatic determination transfers to one
Craven paintings of dark stars
Never to comprehend what's ours
Certainty mystic and fantastic
Limping boldly to ages futuristic
Axis shifted by degrees
Soft mellowness within a breeze
Breaking legacy to not just survive
But for a machine to thrive.
Breaking legacy to not just survive
That's an interesting line, showing more of the sense of the word legacy, like our inherited history being legal, or the law, and breaking that law, and so breaking free, is a huge thought-crime.
Perhaps you didn't mean that! It's a great poem.
I think each word has multiple meanings, and it can be interpreted however you want.
I'm happy you like it.
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Thank you for your poetry ^_^
I think this is my favorite line "Limping boldly to ages futuristic"
It resonates somehow to where I am, where I want to be, and the journey to get there.