You need to do yourself that service (ssp-int-day13)
when it rains it is too wet
when it doesn't it is too hot
when he's poor he is too needy
when he's rich he is too greedy
when she's young she's ignorant
when she's strong she's dominant
she's either wicked and mean
or she is a drama queen
what is good is surely a lie
says every single judging eye
they think you're only what they see
even if you don't agree
but you're the one who should define
who you are and draw the line
between your bottom and your surface
you need to do yourself that service
This is my Day 13 of @d-pend's 100 Day Poetry Challenge. You can visit Steemit School on discord if you want to learn more about it.
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Thaanks
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Yes we all need to be true to ourselves, nicely put, well done @hazem91
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It was great to hear this poem in class and brave of you to offer it for critique. Thank you.
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The poetry class is the best thing that could happen to me to improve my poetry