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RE: Whispers - Original poem -100 days poetry challenge- Day 23

in #poetry6 years ago

Very powerful piece! I'm not sure on your meaning but this for me is a tale of the ego and our enslavement to it -

We have been captured by a
trickster.
Everything is a
delusion.

Especially these lines bring it home for me. The trickster of course referring to our cunning egos that will slyly do whatever they can to try and stay alive and in control of the show!

I couldn't have said it better myself!

Amazing work.

With Love
Hart Floe Poet

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