A Most Beautiful Soul
I decided to get creative, and attempt some poetry today:
A Most Beautiful Soul
Elegance and beauty,
often come to mind,
caring, loving nature,
and how you are so kind.
A smile to warm the coldest room,
the scent of your sweet perfume.
Those hazel eyes, so bright,
you are very much a shining light.
All these things are impossible to forget,
I remember it like it was yesterday,
that first time we met.
Having also heard from a mutual friend,
how amazing and wonderful you are,
there is no end;
"You have to meet Shannon... she would definitely like you..."
I was told,
the night got better and better,
as your approach began to unfold.
So the time drew near,
the wait was no more,
I saw you from a distance,
you were as I described before.
Often stuck for words,
not knowing what to say, what to do,
I suddenly found vocabulary,
and said somewhat cheekily;
"Wow! you are beautiful! how are you?"
Some good times did follow,
your heart was my goal.
A heart so warm, so loving,
connected with a most beautiful soul.
But unwittingly,
I did wrong by you,
lacking commitment,
affection and communication too.
Although somewhat late now,
this I must do,
some things I should have said back then are;
I'm sorry, and....
I know now, how I feel about you.
That night at The Undertones,
before leaving you at the show,
the goodbye kiss on the cheek,
was the last...
little did I know.
I reminisce now,
the picture of you walking away,
will the good times come back around?
hopefully, maybe one day.
Past memories of time together,
I hold them all dearly forever,
for our paths to cross again,
I never say never.
So, to you,
A most beautiful soul,
this is everything I wanted to say,
you are wonderful and elegant,
in your own unique way.
Should our paths ever cross again,
I hope you would agree,
for 2 souls to reconcile,
over a warm cup of tea.
I hope you enjoyed "A Most Beautiful Soul", please feel free to leave your thoughts in the comments. 🙂
Oh very beautiful, I love poetry myself brother <3
Very heartfelt, thank you for sharing. You too are also a beautiful "snazzy" soul!
Why, thank you! And you to have a beautiful (Granola Crunch) soul! 😜
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Thank you! It was sort of a spur of the moment thing, I'm not usually one for disclosing feelings and stuff 😶
That would be a nice flash forward and happy time! Warm words and heart Greg!
Thank you abn!
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Thank you, and followed!
An upvote seems like a weak gesture. This is heartwarming.
The Tinman may have a heart after all! Who would have thought??!
This is a nice post. Your start picture with the heart is very nice. @thunderland
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Thank you! Followed.
Oh wauw. Very nice. Makes me think...
Thank you Evie! 🙂 I do have a sensitive side sometimes 🙂
Greg is also a Most Beautiful Soul !
Why, thank you Cardinal Patrick ❤ As are you, A beautiful soul 😇 (I dropped my poker face for 5 minutes, and feelings came from somewhere... and wrote a poem! 😜 )
Very cool, I want some more!