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in #poetry8 years ago (edited)

Had the weirdest dream,
stuck in a cell-shaded sky,
it was me or it was you,
we wound up our hearts
and let go.

oh so wrong we were
to escape in a single breath
oh so far we were
to escape on a little death

kamikaze pilot
frame your conditions
paint it on your nosecone
diving into my gaping chest
all-in, do you see the sun?
setting on our dreams.

in thicker lines we ran
dripping grins and what
we thought we blew right
like birthday candles
on your last cake

oh so wrong we were
to escape in a single breath
oh so far we were
to escape on a little death

kamikaze pilot
frame your conditions
paint it on your nosecone
diving into my gaping chest
all-in, do you see the sun?
setting on our dreams.

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Dont post this much at once...it pushes everyone down the feed I wont flag you but this is a warning thanks! Nice work!

Making more than 4 posts / day is NOT a reason to flag anyone, unless it goes under abuse category which his poems don't.

That would not be good use of a flag. People are free to post as much as they like, the reward system change after 4 posts was only to avoid encouraging bot spam with financial rewards, but just because you post more than 4 times per day does not automatically make it spam.

Apologies, I have a number of poems to add :) Will slow it down to 1 post every few hours. Thank you for letting me know, I honestly didn't realise.

The reason why you shouldn't post more than 4 post per day is because you wont get the same rewards. Basically you will get a smaller reward. How ever feel free to post as much as you want. But as i said 4post/day will secure the good algorithm for rewards.

Thank you for the advice, still getting to know Steemit, I see what you mean about optimising for the algorithm.

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