Forbidden Zone - An Original Poem
forged in youth.
Lingering jeopardy
hides behind his eyes
fixated on the horizon,
unseen enemies.
wields relief;
almost blinding me
to the machine gun
casually pointing
toward motorists.
an imaginary border.
Does the threat of violence
make it real?
Is he playing make believe
or am I?
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hey man. look forward to more poetry. the short lines add breath and time to reflect on each line as well as a sense of urgency. is this intended? either way, it paints a vivid - yet casual picture of the human barrier and threat of violence that protects the state. I myself have reflected "am i being paranoid? dramatic?" i say always question the systems people take for granted - its the only way the world can progress. cheers!
Thanks man, I didn't intend for that.
I was trying to write it somewhat minimalist without actually turning it into a minimalist poem and I ended the lines where I would have for a minimalist poem.
I wrote this poem about the guards that I kept running into at the French border and also about me coming to terms with being forced out of Britain in a month.
No doubt about it, you are the one playing make believe.
Poignant. Nothing disturbs me more - monsters, demons, the darkness I conjur up on pages - than the real people that happily do the work of the state.
LOL
That is very funny :)
bravo
Nice...💕