Ah! Ok, sorry - I didn't fully absorb the Tolkien pattern there. But yes, I see that now.

Regarding my poem, I wrote it last year, so you'd need to scroll back much, much farther. I tend to write about economics, whether it's non-fiction, fiction, or poetry. Right now I'm doing a non-fiction series.

I'm going to try to get more familiar with Tolkien's chant-like feel and see if I can start thinking in his pattern. If I can think it doing housework, I can write it. 😃