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RE: Old English Style Alliterative Poetry
The first poem has such a nice flow. It's sort of a shame that it lacks any actual emotional impact or any reason to be poetry rather than prose. It does feel like it could be the beginning of a longer piece.
The second piece is much better in terms of atmosphere and imagery, though the flow is slightly worse.
A great start to this endeavour :D