Thank you very much for this comment, Moe. I know you have a hard time with longer pieces, so this means a lot coming from you in particular.

I think part of it is that those who write longer pieces tend to go not just for longer lines, but also longer sentences. A paragraph-long sentence is hard to read, and doubly so when split along multiple lines and using much imagery. Whereas this piece is given mostly to shorter lines.

And thank you for the well wishes and compliments :)