Burning Ice

in #poetry6 years ago

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Ice.
Like peppered rice,
you make my insides come alive.

I thirst
after that soothing feel
of you rolling against my tongue.

My rage
melts your perfect form
so I’m reminded to stay gentle.

I’ll act
in a way that lights you up
instead of burning down the castle.

This fire is kind.
Flame after flame,
this fire will drive you insane.

This fire is scared
that rain after rain,
this fire might never see you again.

Storms they are.
I could go toe to toe
and match them rage for rage.

But if my
strengths take a leave of me,
our story will never come of age.

So I’ll stay gentle,
plaster a smile on my face
when these elements cross me again.

The desire for you
keeps me burning stronger
Willy Wonka.

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Great piece...

Ice.
Like peppered rice,
you make my insides come alive.

My fav part

Of course it will be your favourite part. Foodie! Bad shaid.

Poetry is good and we can take profit I like berimimasi share post

@fisteganos, the burning ice.
May your strengths not take leave of you so your beautiful love story can be evergreen.

The last verse tickled me....
I love this.
It's subtle yet speaks volumes of a person trying to be the perfect gentleman.....

Don't let it tickle you much because I am here watching you.... 😂😂😂😂😂

Aaaaaahhhh 😂😂😂😂😂
Monitoring spirit 🏃🏃🏃🏃

@fisteganos, the burning ice.
May your strengths not take leave of you so your beautiful love story can be evergreen.

This nice post.Good morning......

Go ahead and set that fire to the rain and watch it burn :)

This is really cool and a guide to my post as well. Thanks for sharing

Beautiful and Timely. In a world where most of our decisions and actions are inspired by anger and hatred, it's important to remind ourselves that gentleness and patience with one another is always a better option. Thanks so much for sharing this.

My rage
melts your perfect form
so I’m reminded to stay gentle.

You are saying, my love, I am a gentleman. Civil, not uncouth.

I’ll act
in a way that lights you up
instead of burning down the castle.

It's true, love builds, not burn down.


Beautiful piece.

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