What inspires you..#My place of solitude
I watched in dismay
what has life become of me
I searched for inner peace
a place to unwind
through the hassles of tough days
then I approach you
buh you scared me
source my itels12
did I provoke you?
you showed me my fears
the waters
but yet my zodiac
I wonder how raged you are
watching my face grumble
and finally I feel the breeze
the warmth of nature
so soothing
my feet's are chilled
it calms the troubles
showing me the beauty of days ahead
a place I come to be at Peace
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I will...I am humbled for such a recognition. I will keep checking.
Poetry why didn't you pick me as one of your kind I can only say a little a out what people create ..nice post bro more from you
Thanks bro...blessings comes in different manners...even when we least thought it would come by.
Poetry one of the things that l find bit tough to crack. Maybe because l flow easily with nonfiction but since alot of my great friends here dwell alot in this aspect, l shall unravel the mysteries behind it.
Wooow...it's a matter of your soul's muse,what gives you inner peace.
Great comeback man ):) I am happy to see you back on track. Awesome poetry again . Thanks for sharing it with us. :) God Bless. Peace and Love.
Thank you Boss..am trying my best
The ocean is so frightening yet so soothing isn't it? I think about that every time I'm near it.
This is a good poem and said very well. The only issue I have is that you tagged it "untalented". Shouldn't be so negative about your work.
Noted...you suggest a good tag my friend. Thank you for coming by.