Haiku, image - Mizu no Oto Contest week #2
Photo credit @marcoriccardi
a trapped leaf attracts
glints and looks
sguardi e bagliori sulla
foglia sospesa
Photo credit @marcoriccardi
a trapped leaf attracts
glints and looks
sguardi e bagliori sulla
foglia sospesa
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Like a spider's web, image and poem catch autumn! The leaf has been saved from the fall. Autumn suspended! I embrace you, @f3nix.
Thanks for your words Nancy, it's always nice to see how my words resonate with your thoughts. There was so much to say here.. a hug back 😊
Nancy, why don't you try to write one too? We miss you! 🤗
True!!
And I miss you! I'll try. Kiss
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Thanks bud!
Simple and true. I like this. You're right, my eye is drawn to the leaf in the photo first as it basks in the sunlight.
Thanks, this is not that great.. somehow I did a terrible effort and changed it 1M times.
Hey,
I found your blog through @vdux. Thank you for donating to his contest. You are awesome. 😎
You're welcome .. you're a cool guy too, let's keep in touch!
Definitely. 😎
:) <3 <3 <3
Hey Pixie! How are you doing?
I'm alright ty for asking. Hope you are doing well.
So far so good. The contest have just been funded and we added a poetry contest. Thanks to you too, you've been essential for the initiative together with the first supporters.
:)
:^P
Notice Kireji and Kigo. Well done.
Thanks! 3-5-3 structure for the English .. I stayed essential.
Thanks for donating to @vduc’s haiku contest. 💕 Great imagery with your haiku. 😊
My pleasure, I appreciate every friend in fiction and poetry. Thanks for passing by .. I wrote way better ones hehe 😁
Yesterday I talked to my brother about Poetry and also mentioned the haikus here on steemit. I told him that I find poetry as the kings discipline in using language and that Poetry is compressed language. It uses as few words as possible and as wide a spectrum as possible." We also talked about the universe and he explained some simple things to me which I haven't understood so far. That made me thinking that Poetry is like squeezing the stars into a black hole where it shrinks to a tiny size but still retains this incredible mass. So I feel the art of poetry. It is often misjudged, smiled at and not understood. Indeed, you have to be able to get involved in poetry. The fleeting and hurried one does not do it justice, nor the addict and after honouring the languishing one. It comes from the inside of a black hole.
Reading this haiku I felt the mood of autumn and this little irritation it provoked as the non-sensible use of words makes it so good to let me feel and see and ponder autumn.
P.S. I think, for haikus it is also important that it matches the seasons. :)
This is a beautiful simile, thanks for sharing it with me dear.
In this haiku I couldn't reach that zen peace of mind. In fact, it became formally correct: kigo, kireji, metrics.. but without that sparkle. In the beginning, I got a bit depressed for that when I understood it, but then I decided that it happens and we learn also from the moments in which we're not inspired.
A long wait, but it was worth it!
🙏
I hope so 😉 I prefer the Italian version this time..