Very beautiful poem! Writing poetry is something myself and @td4me80 do on our free time. This one short piece we wrote last weekend titled 'Puddles to Frost' :

My alarm was set for the day to start,
The sun rose high and made its mark,
Frost to puddles and flowers to bloom,
My love left and promised to return soon,
Days to months and months to years,
Never to return; left in tears,
Turn the pages of night 'till noon,
Never to return, so much for soon,
When time slows down, matter does too,
Stars in the sky won't hold true,
The sun never rose and left a gloom,
Puddles to frost and nothing to bloom..