Amnesia (An Original Poem)

in #poetry9 years ago (edited)

The charm
of afternoon hours
keep slipping away
so lazily past
the rolling sea

A growing pile
of steel bottle tops
litter the sand at my feet
along with nagging cares,
which are beginning to
feel as far away as home

At this rate,
if the warm island breeze
continues to rustle
the palm fronds just so
and the fresh ceviche
keeps coming, cool and sweet,

Those dark circles
will disappear and
that old, endless string
of 4:30AM yesterdays
could be mistaken
for some haunting dream

It should take
just two more days, I surmise,
of this tropical clime
to regain enough strength
to realize that I've been
foolishly stumbling,
blindly under some kind
of strange spell

Then it comes,
clear and crisp
as the cathedral bell
I breathe easy
and my mind is freed
what we consider vacation
is truly life, indeed.


*I am an American novelist, poet, traveler, and Steemit enthusiast. If you’ve enjoyed my poetry, autographed copies of my handmade poetry chapbooks, Emancipation, and The Greatest of Secrets are for sale now on Peerhub for a limited time.

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Love the beach life but when I can't be there I steemit in.
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Kudos, I enjoyed your poem.

Beach, Beer, and Sunshine. Sounds good.

That's an unbeatable combination. 🌞

It's funny how day to day stresses take a hold of us without our noticing, until we go somewhere to be refreshed and find it clinging and suddenly we're hyper aware of it. Maybe I'm misinterpreting, but after reading that I had such a clear image of my last getaway and that feeling that what I was getting away from held onto my coattails for a bit before I shook it off.

It's so true, the stress accumulates slowly (and sometimes unnoticeably) until we decompresss. Then it's like, "Ahh, so this is the real me?" I wrote this poem on a plane to Puerto Rico a few years ago. It was about this exact time of the year. It had been below zero here in MN for weeks and I had been working massive overtime. Needless to say, the sun and sand were very much appreciated ! Thanks for your comment!

So nice you can take a break and let us share a bit. Please enjoy!

I can feel it!! are you there yet?

Less than three weeks now. The countdown has begun!

Love your work & your words!

YOU ARE A TRUE INSPIRATION!

Thank you!

Thank you very much, @breezin!

Vacation time draws nearer every day, my friend! The last seven lines are more true than ever.

Yes, it sure does! I'm ready to live those last seven. Thanks for stopping by! 😊🌴

The words brought to me freedom, fun, relax...See you later @ericvancewalton :)

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