Past Break - Writers Block Poetry Contest Week 4

in #poetry7 years ago (edited)

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The wind slowly whispers its breeze;
We have journeyed to the vast green field.
People everywhere, either sat or stood on the dim grass —
—where there was no ray of light from the sun.

We did the same though with a bit glimpse from the sunlight
Hours we have conversed, gagged and learned.
While the intellectual chit-chat went down to the core,
It wasn't a surprise that there were plentiful nuisances around.

However, we did not mind, yes a bit, still... all is well.
And as the day was lent to breaking and ending,
Our circular foundation ended with missing pillars.

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February 21, 2018

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My favourite line is; And as the day was lent to breaking and ending,
Our circular foundation ended with missing pillars.

Excellent and creative use of words. Nice work!!!

Thank you for appreciating my poem!

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