Haiku - Weeds

in #poetry6 years ago

Weeds

Ocean breeze brings weeds
peeking through the crevices
nurturing lifeforms.
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If you would like to join this Haiku contest hosted by @vdux, click here.

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I love this. So alive with nature and meaning. You're killing it with these haikus.

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thank you so much anj! i was starting to get a complex because no one commented.

you are my sweetheart. :)

Oh, the dreaded empty comments. Dah-da-daaaahhhn!

Looks like people have noticed it now. Yay. Lovely stuff

love

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hahaahahahah "dreaded empty" .. i need to write a poem about the hollow feeling and deep down darkness of my soul when that happens buahahaahahahah

thank you my sweet Anj.
love yazzzz
Eagle

mwahahah the darkness of the soul... that would be awesome :D

love ya too

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yeahhhh it will come up, watch! LOL
the empty feeling of when i get no comments or do not win a contest and see someone win that is a friend ... darkness of the soulllll hahahaah

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eagle

hahahah I know that feeling oh so well lol

It's weird when a friend wins though. I feel really chuffed for them and happy, but the dark dejected misery of my personal failure pulls at my soul.

laters
love

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yeah, i guess its good when friends are competing i kind of was thinking of when friends let other
friends win over true talent, etc.
love
eagle

Nice picture and nice haiku! The red rocks in the background bring it all together. I resteemed this and I'm about to comment on the contest page.

thank you so much! glad i could join in on this one. :)

The discipline and economy with words that are required to write a haiku, makes it one of the cleanest forms of poetry. You used so little words and created such an intense sense of nature. Wonderful!

i am just beginning to learn this, and i find that because i am a person (sometimes) of few words this type of poetry fits my personality. i love nature and creativity so very much. i truly appreciate your comment and support!
hugs,
eagle

You're getting pretty good at this Cas! :) Goodluck on the contest!

thank you so much!! you saw me when i first started, i know you said you had written them before. i had always shied away from poetry but i hope something was tapped into and i can keep progressing. hugs.

Haiku has a different theme. Mine were more on scribbles here and there. Haiku has syllable type of format, which is quite complicated. Some would think it's too easy but it's quite difficult for me. So double thumbs up!

Haiku should never be underestimated. A few words but full of impact. ^^

ah okay, yes they are apparently complicated. i just let things flow so maybe i'm not doing it right? i dunno. lol
i love few words and i totally agree!! less words = POWAAAAA hahahaah

Hahahah the flow was done like super duper. ^^

thank you :)
i still look forward to reading yours when/if you post them

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