The Mind's Eye

in #poetry7 years ago

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THE MIND’S EYE

A kaleidoscope of thought
momentary happiness
frosted memories
melting in the mind’s eye

Torn feelings
mended by weak thread
that cannot hold
broken passion

Please say goodbye
before the music
becomes noise

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Perhaps we stay past when the music fades and becomes noise because we are hoping against hope for another chance to mend the broken passion.

Exactly @cecicastor, we desperately try to mend the broken passion with "weak thread" but that's all we have to give.

it is true that you have a good mind eye, because, it's better to really say goodbye before the music becomes noise. it takes the wise with a good mind eye to say this. good job.

Exactly @freedom12 but how many times do we get it right? I've often stayed long after the music has ended.

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