Besides reviews I will also do some poetry

Title explains it quite well the message I'm trying to send forth but here's a little taste. this is totally original I honestly just wrote it from nothing. if I ever steal It would be blind for I have no intention of plagiarizing anything. I hope you enjoy.
Her eyes were like Saturn
like on of the planets she was crying dimonds
I am too simple
look at her and I see a mircle
a beauty more beautiful than the sea
i sigh for i'll never get that high as high as her
I'll be frozen at the summit of the world and still never be by her
I will freeze for you for my sou is icy but my mood is chill
she then falls from the sky tears in her eyes she may be ill
yes deathly ill as if she had fallen
fallen in love
i could finally embrace her she was cold but I was colder
Our love froze and stayed together
piece by piece as I fell piece by piece
just now this I did love her well.