In The Sea Of Love
I loved you very and gently, the wind blew from the eastern side of the scented fields. The beauty of your passion has raised our emotions to the sky, the stars are bright in your green eyes - Waves hide the deep desires of cosmic expectations in the trance of beauty.
Source - giphy.com/gifs/fantasy-w87nAz8rDux7GThe disadvantage of your touch shows the cold emotions in the hot kiss. Feelings of attachment show signs of joy in your vicinity, restless soul launches free solutions of common happiness - I can not forget your beautiful traces of energetic enthusiasm.
We pass by the romantic memories, the filled heart sees a smile in the stars of your face. We enjoy parks and golden parties, energy is the right choice of a lottery between karma and people - You left heavenly traces in my deepest dreams.
- Original poetry written by @dobartim
There are almost no actions, only descriptions of the deepest psychological states, the most sincere of a chaste love. Poetic words @dobratim
Taper your senses
Choose a way to plan your path.
Climb your own fences
Crack the ice and then laugh.
Sew the fate of your choice,
Don't turn you into them.
Every person has a voice,
And dear Steemien, yours is a gem.
Nice work @dobartim
We are helpless in the hands of love.
Check out some poems on my blog and give them your up-vote if you think they worth it.
Specifically this.
https://steemit.com/poetry/@joebest/e-x-i-t
Very nice poem, I like how the image relates to the poem, giving us an indepth explanation....
"The disadvantage of your touch shows the cold emotion in the hot kiss" it's great how the negativity of the touch still ended up being a positive emotion "cold emotion in the hot kiss" really great poem!!! Thanks for sharing
Puro amor. Hermoso! 😊
Well organized poet.... 👍👍👍
good poetry. keep going ♥ @dobartim
Nice post
So beautiful and heart touching. I think attachment is not to bad as ong as we decide to live in this state of conciousness. Here it is some way of expressing our love. If we move on there comes the heavy part of letting go. Some images seem to be more persistent than others. I think those are the images of love <3
@dobartim ,
This is one of the best poem i have read.
Full of emotions...
I so much love this line