In The Eyes Of Your Luck

in #poetry • 6 years ago

  • Silver words show new ideas through the old paths of the freak, we dance on the money codes until the music of the crypto guitar plays. With the View you count the emotions for the gambling table of life, I was left speechless when I saw you naked with truth and sword.

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  • I'm going into new goals with surprise, The newspapers are writing about you a lot of lies because I know you kissed me behind the scene of famous characters. I missed a dream game, you mean more to me than passion - I listen to your tender lips in love wind.

  • Mathematics counts the emotion through the triumph of victory, our relationship is greater than the stars in the oceans of freedom. Romantic music waves drive the enthusiasm of ecstasy, this is the moment for serious energy in our connection of future magic.

  • We feel the victory of pure virtue and moon game in the fields of heavenly diamonds. The hand is gentle like silk in the lake of perfect cleverness, Swans circle around your body while we talk about new fairy tales - This moment is an eternal memory of beautiful moments of life.

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Original poetry written by @dobartim
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     6 years ago 

    The title of this poem is so touchy.. wonderful words..

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     6 years ago 

    The land of magic

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     6 years ago 

    Wow looking beautiful GIF photo

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     6 years ago 

    This great post, personally I loved reading any poetry, anyway your poetry is so good. and I appreciate you. keep it up

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     6 years ago 

    See you on Steem Schools

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       6 years ago 

      Sir i just say thats awesome, the poetry makes the pictures more valuable and clearly defined. Its means a lot @dobartim
      i resteem this post

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       6 years ago 

      @@@@ Nice post @@@@@ @dobartim

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       6 years ago 

      Make better comment, see you on Steem Schools online class https://discord.gg/q9VEn5n

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       6 years ago (edited)

      Hello @dobartim

      I heard so much about you and your Steemit school during the last STEEMUP OWERRI MEGA MEETUP organized by my community @euronation, that I didn't waste time to search you out and FOLLOWED you.

      Reading through what you want to achieve with Steemit school, I deeply believe we have areas of common interest and similar enthusiasm for steem blockchain.

      Hope we get to talk privately soon.

      @eurogee, the founder of @euronation community & The Host, Show Us Your Witnesses Weekly Contest

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         6 years ago 

        See you on the top

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           6 years ago 

          The pictures looks so real....Nice peotry love it

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             6 years ago 

            Make a better comment, be part of Steem Schools and learn https://discord.gg/q9VEn5n

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               6 years ago 

              @dobartim cool writing and pretty cool images...Those GIF images are amazing. Is it your own creation?

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                 6 years ago 

                You have sources on the end of poetry

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                   6 years ago 

                  Wow! This is lovely. Your poetic prowess never cease to amaze me... The lines are powerful and practical that one's heart can feel their essence.

                  Particularly, I love this line:

                  I'm going into new goals with surprise, The newspapers are writing about you a lot of lies because I know you kissed me behind the scene of famous characters.

                  Permit me, sir to rephrase the last part of the expression above:

                  "The newspapers (including people) are writing or saying about STEEMIT a lot of lies because I know STEEMIT kissed me behind the scene of famous characters."

                  Thanks @dobartim for sharing this awesome piece of poetry.

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                     6 years ago 

                    Thank you very much for nice words

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