In The Eyes Of Your Luck

in poetry •  4 months ago
  • Silver words show new ideas through the old paths of the freak, we dance on the money codes until the music of the crypto guitar plays. With the View you count the emotions for the gambling table of life, I was left speechless when I saw you naked with truth and sword.

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  • I'm going into new goals with surprise, The newspapers are writing about you a lot of lies because I know you kissed me behind the scene of famous characters. I missed a dream game, you mean more to me than passion - I listen to your tender lips in love wind.

  • Mathematics counts the emotion through the triumph of victory, our relationship is greater than the stars in the oceans of freedom. Romantic music waves drive the enthusiasm of ecstasy, this is the moment for serious energy in our connection of future magic.

  • We feel the victory of pure virtue and moon game in the fields of heavenly diamonds. The hand is gentle like silk in the lake of perfect cleverness, Swans circle around your body while we talk about new fairy tales - This moment is an eternal memory of beautiful moments of life.

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Original poetry written by @dobartim
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The title of this poem is so touchy.. wonderful words..

The land of magic

Wow looking beautiful GIF photo

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Thank you

Hello @dobartim

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Reading through what you want to achieve with Steemit school, I deeply believe we have areas of common interest and similar enthusiasm for steem blockchain.

Hope we get to talk privately soon.

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cool. Nice poem, i learnt you have a channel on dischord where you teach and building a steemit school.
Thats a very good ork friend. I followed for more updated

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I keep wondering how you do use your lines and choice of words. They are unique and amazing, I had no choice than to go through this poem over and over again. This is unique

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This great post, personally I loved reading any poetry, anyway your poetry is so good. and I appreciate you. keep it up

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The pictures looks so real....Nice peotry love it

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@dobartim cool writing and pretty cool images...Those GIF images are amazing. Is it your own creation?

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You have sources on the end of poetry

Wow! This is lovely. Your poetic prowess never cease to amaze me... The lines are powerful and practical that one's heart can feel their essence.

Particularly, I love this line:

I'm going into new goals with surprise, The newspapers are writing about you a lot of lies because I know you kissed me behind the scene of famous characters.

Permit me, sir to rephrase the last part of the expression above:

"The newspapers (including people) are writing or saying about STEEMIT a lot of lies because I know STEEMIT kissed me behind the scene of famous characters."

Thanks @dobartim for sharing this awesome piece of poetry.

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Thank you very much for nice words

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You're welcome @dobartim.

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I love the pictures, how did u get them?

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Wow. This is amazing. Sir, i'd like to ask..... What inspires your language of writing. It seems more like incomprehensible to the simple mind except you take deep thoughts about it. And really that's why poetry is all about.

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Love and spirituality above words

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That's life force.... The strongest force I know. I'll sure learn from you.

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Thank you

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You're most graciously welcome sir

Sir i just say thats awesome, the poetry makes the pictures more valuable and clearly defined. Its means a lot @dobartim
i resteem this post

Such emotions and words show a very different side of you.....beautiful human side!

La poesía es algo que une al hombre con su creador y lo hace de una manera sutil pero poderosa, es cómo si Dios mismo necesitase decirnos algo y para llegar a nosotros utiliza la prosa inspirada de un hermano.

Poetry is something that unites man with his creator and he does it in a subtle but powerful way, it is as if God himself needed to tell us something and to reach us he uses the inspired prose of a brother

Love is the mathematics of our soul, it's an universe to explore with our mind. Even though we have enemies we must realize that is the example why are we on a golden path of success...
Small souls always try to bring down big dreams and we're here to break that routine, for once and for all...

This s do cool:

Mathematics counts the emotion through the triumph of victory...

And by the way, @dobartim, I always love the pictures in your write-ups. Awesome animated stuffs.

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Wow, amazing poetry for the Cryptocurrencies, and in my opinion the news is misguiding people regarding the Cryptocurrencies and speculation news is spreading all over the world but the people who really believing on the Cryptocurrency market and thinking as this can prove the real freedom of money, they know the real capability of Crypto. Let's hope for the great Crypto years ahead and keep up the great work. Thanks for sharing and wishing you an great day. Stay blessed. 🙂

Boss, I admire your presentation/rendition and lines. I love the stylish way of picturing "life". Life's beautiful and those beautiful moments are never meant to be forgotten eternally. Thanks for giving out varieties of poems and gifs that are rich and original. Bless you boss💖

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Amazing post
Beautiful word
Beautiful picture

The title conveyed a deep insight and reading through gave deeper insight. This is beautiful.

I love this poem as a whole... but as I must admit, I like the first line most.

Thank you, @dobartim

This is amazing @dobartim