Better Than Beauty

in #poetry7 years ago
  • At the end of the thought comes starry words of the soul contest, the river throws tears on the coast of desire through the romantic smile of your angelic face. We run for rewards in the sand of life, we pay time with misses and victories - This is a wonderful morning with the smell of success.

  • We bring happiness to the wind of emotions, steady knowledge adds new math to the ideal of your beauty. The volcano of passion comes to the climax of the theater play of madness through materialism, gently grabs my hand and kisses me to start a new day.

  • You are a shadow and a picture, you are graffiti on the edge of my memory. I love your game behind closed doors, take off the wisdom gloves while walking through the imaginative oasis. Above the surface there are deeper places of our consciousness and power - show me higher achievements.

  • Drums call for a fire around your body through the magic sounds of the guitar. Wake up in the land of a giant where love is drinking water from a pure heart source. I will not allow you to fall through the oblivion of others' mistakes; love is an eternal goal above all boundaries.

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Original poetry written by @dobartim
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Nothing can define true love more than this phrase, "I will not allow you to fall through the oblivion of others' mistakes; love is an eternal goal above all boundaries."

Sometimes i had to read your poem more than twice before getting closer to it's meaning. Deep poems flow from deep thoughts.

Thanks for sharing.

Exellent comment

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The morning love awaits our soul until we open our eyes to see deeper and farther then ever.
This day brings power to my wisdom and is electrified with passion. Challenges are our obstacles to jump over and spread our wings before we land. The sky is not enough for abstract ideas but luckily there is the Cosmos that awaits for us.
Fear is not to be feared!

Always a beautiful poem from you @dobartim

Brvo, awesome comment, keepo going

thanks @dobartim. You poets inspire me!

Thank you Luka

Love is an eternal goal above all boundaries.

I love that line... And also,we run for rewards in the sand of life, we pay time with misses and victories.

These two lines are deep. They are really deep. We pay for time through misses and victories.... But everytime, we are paying.

Excellent comment

HAbe to take it to me...deep words always need to be more attention ;) great poetry
Have a beautiful day my dear

Thank you my sister, see you on the top

interesting poem i must confess, really endowed with quality. i must be part of the steemit school. having you as a teacher will be a prestigious privilege... thanks for sharing

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This is a wonderful morning with the smell of success.

I feel the same way too with this morning.
Lol

Wake up in the land of a giant where love is drinking water from a pure heart source.

Sometimes I feel this thing called love can never get satisfied. You love, but then, you need to keep drinking.

Thanks for this beautiful post this morning sir.

Have a nice and successful day my beautiful lady

Thanks. you too

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Thank you very much. you are the best.. I think I want to learn and practice that....

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The pictures are very beautiful, passionate, passionate, very nice to see.

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This picture very beautiful, I love it this picture
Thanks for sharing....

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