Better Than Beauty

in poetry •  7 months ago
  • At the end of the thought comes starry words of the soul contest, the river throws tears on the coast of desire through the romantic smile of your angelic face. We run for rewards in the sand of life, we pay time with misses and victories - This is a wonderful morning with the smell of success.

  • We bring happiness to the wind of emotions, steady knowledge adds new math to the ideal of your beauty. The volcano of passion comes to the climax of the theater play of madness through materialism, gently grabs my hand and kisses me to start a new day.

  • You are a shadow and a picture, you are graffiti on the edge of my memory. I love your game behind closed doors, take off the wisdom gloves while walking through the imaginative oasis. Above the surface there are deeper places of our consciousness and power - show me higher achievements.

  • Drums call for a fire around your body through the magic sounds of the guitar. Wake up in the land of a giant where love is drinking water from a pure heart source. I will not allow you to fall through the oblivion of others' mistakes; love is an eternal goal above all boundaries.

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Original poetry written by @dobartim
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This is a wonderful morning with the smell of success.

I feel the same way too with this morning.
Lol

Wake up in the land of a giant where love is drinking water from a pure heart source.

Sometimes I feel this thing called love can never get satisfied. You love, but then, you need to keep drinking.

Thanks for this beautiful post this morning sir.

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Have a nice and successful day my beautiful lady

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Thanks. you too

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Nothing can define true love more than this phrase, "I will not allow you to fall through the oblivion of others' mistakes; love is an eternal goal above all boundaries."

Sometimes i had to read your poem more than twice before getting closer to it's meaning. Deep poems flow from deep thoughts.

Thanks for sharing.

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Exellent comment

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Thanks to Steem School. Thanks to you

The morning love awaits our soul until we open our eyes to see deeper and farther then ever.
This day brings power to my wisdom and is electrified with passion. Challenges are our obstacles to jump over and spread our wings before we land. The sky is not enough for abstract ideas but luckily there is the Cosmos that awaits for us.
Fear is not to be feared!

Always a beautiful poem from you @dobartim

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Brvo, awesome comment, keepo going

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thanks @dobartim. You poets inspire me!

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Thank you Luka

Love is an eternal goal above all boundaries.

I love that line... And also,we run for rewards in the sand of life, we pay time with misses and victories.

These two lines are deep. They are really deep. We pay for time through misses and victories.... But everytime, we are paying.

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Excellent comment

HAbe to take it to me...deep words always need to be more attention ;) great poetry
Have a beautiful day my dear

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interesting poem i must confess, really endowed with quality. i must be part of the steemit school. having you as a teacher will be a prestigious privilege... thanks for sharing

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Thank you very much. you are the best.. I think I want to learn and practice that....

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Thanks for sharing very nice art post

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very good post,@dobartim

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This picture very beautiful, I love it this picture
Thanks for sharing....

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I love the pictures you use for your work sir.

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very nice scenery.... loved it @dobartim

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i also see u on here...

The pictures are very beautiful, passionate, passionate, very nice to see.

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@dobartim, you deserve a hug for this beautiful line:

"We run for rewards in the sand of life, we pay time with misses and victories ..."

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Thank you very much

Wow,very beautifuly expressions of emotion ,the use of mataphore are awesome.Glade to read your poetry.

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Thank you very much for nice words

Beautiful Picture

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It's very nice to have your writing later. I went in love with your writing, because after seeing your post and photographing, I was full of my sweet heart. I've really been in love with your writing. I want to wear more beautiful writing, please give me a chance.

You post more beautifully so that I can wear it. Thank you so much for posting so beautiful writing on your face.

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thank you.

Wow such a beautiful and amazing poetry, I loved it thank you for sharing Sir.

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Wow I really love this photos. In real life here, if a ladies hair flows like what we seeing up there!, mehn!!!. People tend to attribute bad names to her.
It's only appreciated been fiction.

As for that nature book.... I'm gonna get it....
Lolzz
Nice post 👌

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Please drop the steemschool discord link here for me

Tiene una imaginación increíble, Tomo la poesía con una enseñanza reflexiva. No nos conformemos con menos, haciendo más produciremos más, pero para lograrlo debemos poner a volar nuestra imaginación hasta su mas alta expresión; así tendremos logros que llegarán al cielo, pero siempre manteniendo la humildad y el amor que impulsa nuestro corazón a beneficiar a otros y tenderle la mano.

Gracias por estas maravillosas poesías, me encanta las fotos, transmiten una paz infinita. Un abrazo @dobartim.

So beautiful... Thank you!!