As We Walk On The Clouds

in poetry •  9 months ago
  • I'm passing by the silence in the night bird park, I see your smile in the words of the Prophet. Run wind power with millions of lightning thunders, I feel your loyalty in a spirit of supreme character - be my partner for life victories, be my greatest love.

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  • The moon comes with a new past, the future is repeated in business rituals because we want money as a permanent form of happiness. Let's go further than our success, to start a wave of memories in the focused goal of mountain peaks - Help me with your unlimited power.

  • Clouds show new stars on your hands, beauty attracts new universes of perfect predictions. We are trying to push waterfalls into glasses of dreams, opportunities circulating with digital angels - it's just a great illusion - Run your potential to be smaller than the biggest freak.

  • We see great people in modest manners, habits change details and make up the loser of the greatest icon of success.
    The inspiration of passion, enthusiasm and love is seen in your green eyes, I feel your love in the depths of my heart - the soul.


Original poetry written by @dobartim
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your post animation picture so beautiful and very good . @dobartim

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Thank you very much

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Be part of Steemit School if you want to make money

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How @hashclub can be part of school.

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Thank you

Great poetry sir... I will join the discord channel immediately 😃

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This is right way

Great post sir @dobartim You really are an inspiration and booster at the steemit school.It is really the right way of commenting and interacting with others. I followed through all the posts you sent to the chat yesterday and it really helps a lot. I understand that necessity to interact and make good comments. We win together.

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See you on onine class on Steemit School

Nice Poetry 👌👌👌,

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Welcome to Steemit

I like these lines much"We see great people in modest manners, habits change details and make up the loser of the greatest icon of success." this is true,heart touching poetry

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Thank you very much

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Thank you very much

perfect princess

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Love is main thing in universe

great post.realy nice work.

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Make better comment and be part of Steemit School https://discord.gg/q9VEn5n

Have a nice day..^^*

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You too

There it is again 😊

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Poetry is my spiritual challenge

Such a real, creative piece of poetry that captures some of the most fundamental human emotions- love. It breaks barriers and create a platform upon which all other human emotions and abilities are built. It can even gurranttee success. Also we need a partner to make it. We cant do it all on our own. There is his need for community effort, team work, togetherness and a sense of belonging. Two can make a team. It can always be at least two. And when there is mutual unity of purpose and understanding within partners or a group, success can always be achieved. Great work by you @dobartim
I appreciate your efforts on this community

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See you on the top

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Me too really appreciate this community.

This is a nice piece. I will really appreciate if you explain this and share what gave your inspiration for this piece so that we will be able to read it again, but now through your eyes for better understanding

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Thank you very much...

I'm passing by the silence in the night bird park, I see your smile in the words of the Prophet. Run wind power with millions of lightning thunders, I feel your loyalty in a spirit of supreme character - be my partner for life victories, be my greatest love.

As We Walk On The Clouds
dobartim (69) in poetry • 1 hour ago
I'm passing by the silence in the night bird park, I see your smile in the words of the Prophet. Run wind power with millions of lightning thunders, I feel your loyalty in a spirit of supreme character - be my partner for life victories, be my greatest love.

98a5e6b140f429e479f2378d0165c662.gif

The moon comes with a new past, the future is repeated in business rituals because we want money as a permanent form of happiness. Let's go further than our success, to start a wave of memories in the focused goal of mountain peaks - Help me with your unlimited power.

Clouds show new stars on your hands, beauty attracts new universes of perfect predictions. We are trying to push waterfalls into glasses of dreams, opportunities circulating with digital angels - it's just a great illusion - Run your potential to be smaller than the biggest freak.

We see great people in modest manners, habits change details and make up the loser of the greatest icon of success.
The inspiration of passion, enthusiasm and love is seen in your green eyes, I feel your love in the depths of my heart - the soul.
Wow sir every single words of the above poetry touches my heart.I wanna be the greatest member of this school.And me also want to change my profile as creative life and want to increase many members in this steem school as their setting profile as member of the creative life.isn't it cool.?? 😀

Original poetry written by @dobartim
Be part of our Steemit School : https://discord.gg/q9VEn5n
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Thanks a lot

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You are well come sir

This line wowed me: "We are trying to push waterfalls into glasses of dreams." Thank you for this.

What I like most about @dobartim poetry post is the way he combines the English, it is so unique. You are already at the top, just maintain it

Such a beautiful picture at the begin, Reminds me of lsd :)
It is very meaningful and beautiful, Especially the part that connects to each other
It is clear that the woman gives her husband a living and receives it again in a cycle, This is a very sweet to two person becomes One
And ultimately reaching the joy and peak of love is this point. Good to those who really experienced this moment ;)

@dobartim is fast becoming my favorite poet. And you, the best with Art.