Thoughts in Time ( 100 Days of Poetry ) { Day #80 }
but it shines bright on the skin of the earth there.
Different zones, different times, same news,
same products same feelings.
A day ahead a day behind,
everything is relative to time.
it took one day,
but I arrived the same day that I left.
It is like a stole a chunk of time,
I grabbed a cloud and put it in my cup.
but I can't tell you what will happen next.
As the world rotates,
vibrates,
magnetic energies,
pulls us towards fate.
The clouds pass over in a cycle
form the heavens to the depths.
Lets not think too much
just cherish every breathe.
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If my interpretation is correct, in this poem you are looking at the doors of perception. Nothing is really as it seems, or at least not as solid and clear-cut as we would like to think. Time, place, distance are only as our senses think, but we know that there is a world the senses cannot necessarily make sense of or even begin to understand. Good one bro.
Yes, very good insight,
You even dig deeper than I thought I wrote hahaha.
Respect man !
The world is what it is. The way it appears is then a function of how we see & witness it. Nice flow you got here. Well done
Thanks dude, appreciated, I think I'll be critiquing you this week:)
Always a pleasure
I'll wait on that