IS IT OVER? Poem of love and hate!
what is love, when it doesn't feel right to say it?
whats love, if your care is not true?
whats love, if holding you close is like hugging a fading air?
whats love, when the air around you is stuffy?
whats love, when your kisses bruises my lips?
whats love, when i don't feel any chill just by hearing your voice?
whats love, when there are no butterflies feeling when you talk?
whats love, when your jokes are dry?
whats love, when selfish service is written all over your face?
whats love, when you hug me to stab me in the back?
whats love, if after having sex with you, i feel guilty?
whats love, if you intoxicated me with your love daily?
whats love, when your appearance makes me sad?
whats love, when your disappearance makes my heart leaps for joy?
whats love, when your words spread bad vibe(s)?
Whats love, when you can't make me feel loved?
Whats love, when I don't want you to be my lover?
Whats love, when i want you to just be a friend nothing more?
Whats love, when I need you later not now?
Whats love, if i'll rather (wait) for tomorrow?
Whats love, even if tomorrow might be too late?
Whats love, if i never want you to hold my hands?
Whats love, if I just want to feel loved tonight, but not by you?
whats a heart, without a beat?
Whats love?
Written and compiled by @deeclown
August-02- 2018
All rights reserved
buddy, perhaps you could write something related to crypto/blockchain :) every time I visit your profile to show my support all I see is poetry (which I dont understand hahaha)
yours
Piotr
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Beautiful post.
Thanks dear
@deeclown, please read the suggested changes to your poem available in the @poetsunited #draftroom - the changes have not been included in this post.
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