LAST NIGHT

in #poetry6 years ago

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It was the day after her prom, and she starts to remember all that went wrong,

She had gone to a bar and ordered a bottle of rum, because her date could not come,

It was supposed to be her special night, dancing with her love under dim lights,

But instead she ended up crying her eyes out,

It was supposed to be the one good thing that happened to her, but somehow she ended up in a bar,

She had imagined lying on the grass with him under a blanket of stars and moonlit sky, but she did not even get to say goodbye,

She just laid in her bed, she still couldnt believe he was actually dead,

She just laid there and wept, he was all she had left, and now he had died in a car accident,

She could here her own heart beat in her head, she wanted to end,

She was fed up, so she slept, she slept and never woke up.

I WROTE THIS A FEW DAYS AGO...SO I THOUGHT I'D SHARE....PLEASE FEEL FREE TO SHARE YOUR OPINIONS

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tragic but beautifully written from the heart <3 keep up the good work. upvoted :)

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