PETALS (A Collaborated Poetry)
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Verse 1 : josediccus
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Your fragrance is like lavender,
tenderly lasting like a forlorn libido,
Caught in the beauty of a rainbow
like aphrodisia in writing antonomasia,
petals undead, freely freed, like a forgotten kiss.
Staying forever
only for a little moment
Verse 2 : dante31
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Your scent pulled me into your orbit
As I watched you burst your colors
Soaked I was in your confetti pouring rain
With you life is a carousel holiday
Let me drown in your ardour
till I lay helpless in the ambient of your corolla
You are my carnival
Everyday is a fun affair
I am forever fascinated by your ravishing beauty
All is a blur except you
Verse 3 : josediccus
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You're a sight for a dying memory,
a beautiful carnality that lingers
Your eroticism makes mortal men.
droops in awe at such tactile banality,
Sensually caressing, your charms gently assessing,
your touch is a longing for wonderland,
smooth as the edges of silk in autumn
Verse 4 : dante31
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You are steaming hot like the end of June
You take away my summer sadness
And melt my frozen heart
Healing me with your soft light
You are my wanderlust, my destination
Let me pleasure you with the sound of my buzz
Your attraction repels all my grief
I am seduced by your hue
I'll surf on your ultrvoilent wave until dying breath
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A steemit original poem written by @dante31 and @Josediccus
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What a terrific collaboration! Your verses complement each other well and the imagery is enticing. Happy to have met you over at the Isle @dante31!
Thank you so much
Enjoyed the poem like crazy @dante31 and @Josediccus; my little micro poetry tease.
she's like a pistol that doesn't piss off
Her aura can grieve my haters
Without her I can't be better
My dying breathe lingers as immortals
From her moonlight kiss which matters
Thanks buddy ...
You are not bad yourself.
I like your last 2 lines.
Awesome
Thanks man!
True love never dies but it could end. Just enjoy it while it last.
Nice poetry.
Thank you Marcus
Absolutely the fine duo, I love the way you combined it, it's amazing I swear, cheers to our collaborations in Future too
Beleive me buddy... you killed this.
You completed this perfectly. Working with you was stressless and flawless.
You're a magnificent writer. The dexterity in your art is unmeasurable.
Wow! Epic work.
Congratulations to us.
Cheers
Certainly my friend, this is epic, it was a total pleasure working with you, this is the first time I'm doing a duet on steemit my friend and it's a wonderful piece really
Cheers to us.
The is a pure masterpiece, the meeting of minds of two seducive poets. I had to read with my dictionary alive. Baddest combo on a poem and you guys still delivered. Kudos!!!
Haha.... said you used a dictionary
Jesediccus gave you work 😂.
Thanks fam
lol Dante seems we have to give them more work to do you know hahahaha
Nice poetry.
Depicts the ravishing nature of a loving female
Wow @synick
Thank you.
@josediccus made it fantastic
Yea, you're welcome. I love the fantasy
Thank you buddy, we're grateful.
You're welcome. please keep up this fantasy
Must love
Dante is here no fears
Haha, funny you...
I'm drunk in love, don't mind me my friend 😍😘
Haha, funny you. Never get drunk in love o before your heart stumbles and grumbles.
Wow,,, this is totally enthralling....
Each line very pleasing to read.
I enjoyed every bit of it
You guys are damn good.
Thanks you Juliet... you're the best.
I'm glad you found it interesting
You bet, Dante is one hell of a fantastic writer
Wow! That made my heart race! You both are breathtakingly fantastic...
Thank you.
It's a pleasure to delight our readers
Your attraction repels all my fear.
I was wearied but your attraction gave me strength.
For with your attraction, I will attract blessings.
Never Fear
Thanks buddy